TOEFL Integrated Writing Practice – Renewable energy

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First, give yourself three minutes to read this article:

The emphasis on renewable energy sources like wind, solar, and hydropower is growing in response to a growing global population and the urgent need to slow down climate change. This cleaner method of energy production aims to lessen the world's dependency on polluting, finite fossil fuels.

First, ongoing technical developments will continue to influence how renewable energy is used in the future. Due to improvements in technology and manufacturing scale, the cost of producing wind and solar energy has been steadily declining, making these renewable sources more affordable than ever. These developments have led to the creation of sophisticated, extremely effective photovoltaic cells, which enable higher energy yield from the same surface area. Similar to how larger, more effective wind turbines have increased power production and lessened wind farms' visual and environmental impact. It is projected that this technological revolution would accelerate the use of renewable energy.

Governments all over the world are establishing ambitious goals to promote the adoption of renewable energy in order to achieve carbon neutral goals. They are also putting policies into place to phase out fossil fuels simultaneously. Governmental incentives such as feed-in tariffs, power purchase agreements, and green certificates have made it possible for renewable energy to be integrated into the market.

Finally, solving the problem of energy storage is crucial to the success of renewable energy. Although plentiful and environmentally friendly, renewable energy sources are not always reliable because the wind does not always blow and the sun does not always shine. This makes effective and substantial energy storage systems necessary. The intermittent nature of renewable energy sources could be dramatically impacted by advances in battery technology, such as solid-state batteries and gravity storage options. These storage options will establish renewable energy's position as a dependable, perpetual power source as they develop.

Next, listen to the following lecture:
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You have twenty minutes to answer the following question. You can refer to the article as you write your essay. You may not listen to the lecture again.

Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the solutions presented in the reading passage.

Sample Response

The lecture presents a counter-argument to the optimistic future of renewable energy depicted in the passage. Each main point of the lecture directly challenges the claims made in the passage, providing a different perspective on the potential growth of renewable energy. In terms of technological advancements, the lecture questions the pace and impact of improvements in renewable energy technologies. Contrary to the passage's positive outlook on the declining costs and increased efficiency of wind and solar energy technologies, the lecture argues that the rate of technological improvement has plateaued and even brings additional environmental concerns. Furthermore, the lecture counters the passage's claim about the effectiveness of governmental policies and market integration. Instead of viewing them as strong drivers for the renewable energy sector, the lecture asserts that these policies are inconsistent and inadequate. It argues that current market mechanisms fail to facilitate comprehensive integration of renewable energy into existing grids, a stark contrast to the passage's optimism about policy evolution and market flourishing. Finally, the lecture presents a pessimistic view on energy storage, a critical aspect of renewable energy. While the passage envisions maturing storage solutions that address the intermittent nature of renewables, the lecture highlights the high cost, resource intensity, and environmental implications of large-scale storage solutions, suggesting a considerable challenge rather than a forthcoming resolution.ln sum, the lecture offers a cautionary perspective, contradicting the passage's optimistic view by highlighting the potential pitfalls and slower-than-anticipated progress in the renewable energy sector.